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2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（十）现代技术通讯

一． 与专题相关的话题项目

通讯 (Communication) 、科普知识与现代技术（Popular science and modern technology） 二．与专题相关的知识准备

1. 相关单元：7BU6 Electricity, 8AU1 Encyclopedias, 8AU2 Numbers, 8AU3 Computers, 8AU4 Inventions, 8AU7 Memory, 8BU7 The unknown world 2. 相关词汇：

高频词：rule, anyone, reply, foolish, connect, moment, cooker, fridge, lock, test, tidy, touch, human, dinosaur, inventor, musician, scientist, born, countryside, intelligence, ability, perhaps, invention, notebook, include, even, however, suddenly, nobody, win, dollar, number, check, son, chess, wise, promise, prize, amount, rest, gold, instead, realize, copy, traffic, accident, order, type, brain, control, expensive, tiny, depend, speed, railway, company, price, sell, popular, funny, telephone, comfortable, invent, since, lose, improve, mind, silly, letter, worth, spell, unless, trouble, manager, unknown, receive, hill, loud, quiet, round, wonder, refuse, knife, pleased

高频短语：in a way, switch off, tidy up, in the countryside, human being, die out, find out, go for a walk, a long time ago, and so on, copy down, work as, depend on, in addition, look forward to, since then, keep in touch with, in the daytime, keep… off, at the same time, instead of, take out, keep quiet, because of, as soon as possible, agree with, disagree with

拓展词汇：electricity, conversation, identify, wire, cable, battery, bulb, Italian, artistic, fossil, compare, operate, total, create, particle, mobile phone, special, memory, corner, mention, mile, step, similar, wallet, damage, frightened, terrible, explain, washing machine, a packet of, be connected to, power station, air conditioner, challenge …to…, be unaware of, grand total, pour out,

3. 经典句型：a. It is + adj. + for sb. +to do/ It is+ adj. + that 从句 b. Sb. spend time on sth./ in doing sth./ It takes sb. + time+ to do. c. One advantage is that …. Another advantage is that ….

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d. On one hand, … On the other hand, e. I think/believe that… 二、经典例题：

随着互联网的发展，越来越多的学生开始使用网络。最近，你的学校进行了一个关于中学生是否应该上网的调查，大都数同学赞成上网，少部分同学反对上网，请根据以下表格内容，把同学们的讨论结果整理出来，并就如何正确使用网络提出你自己的观点，写成一篇80字左右的短文。(注意：文章的开头已给出)

赞成（60%） 1互联网非常有用，它改变了人们的生活 2彼此沟通更方便 3可查找大量信息并随时与朋友交换信息 你的观点？ With the development of the Internet, it has become more and more common among the students. Should students use the Internet? Recently, our school did a survey on it. According to the survey, 60 percent of the students agree to use the Internet because…

解题思路： 1.审题：

a. 本文共有 6 个要点 b. 时态主要采用 一般现在时 c. 人称是 _we/The Internet_ 2.可能用到的短语和句型 be useful to, change people’s life, communicate with, search information, share information, a waste of time, be harmful to, in one’s opinion a. It is + adj. + for sb. +to do/ It is+ adj. + that 从句

b. Sb. spend time on sth./ in doing sth./ It takes sb. + time+ to do. c. One advantage is that …. Another advantage is that …. d. On one hand, … On the other hand,

反对（40%） 1 上网浪费了大量的时间和金钱 2 网络游戏会毒害青少年 2

3.成文：

With the development of the Internet, it has become more and more common among the students. Should students use the Internet? Recently, our school did a survey on it. According to the survey, 60 percent of the students agree to use the Internet because the Internet is very useful and it change people life. It’s also more confident for us to communicate with each other and we can share information with ours friends. There is a lot of information on it, so when we don’t understand sth. We may find the explain on it. But 40 percent of the students against. They think play computer games is harmful for teenagers and waste a lot of time and money. Although Internet has some problems, I think it is good for us. If we use the Internet correct, we will learn a lot. 点评：

整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。部分句子的结构不够完整，缺发主语或谓语，词类误用的现象比较明显，表达也过于中式，略显生硬。此外， 应适当使用连接词，是文章过渡更自然。 4. 分项分档评分表 项目 内容 6分 要素 给分表 3-2.5 2 1.5 1 0 切合题意，6-5．5 5—4.5 4-3.5 体现要点 有所发挥 6 6-5.5 准确语 法 性 6分 词 汇 机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误 流畅结构 性 3分 自评总分： 10.5 5. 检查思路：

5—4.5 4-3.5 4 3-2.5 2 1.5 1 0 3-2.5 2-1.5 1 0.5 0.5 0 0 0 0 3